FIRST STANZA
I am Max
I am Max
I wonder if there is going to be the future
I hear a pig on kingan
I see hawaii
I want to go to hawaii
I am Max
SECOND STANZA
I pretend to be a cop
I feel the sky
I touch a cloud
I worry that i am going to get a beat up
I cry at a tangi
I am Max
THIRD STANZA
I understand rich people
I say that monster trucks
I dream about going to hawaii
I try to do work with my nan
I hope to learn
I am Max
this is my i am poem where i show you about what i think and do
Hi Max. My name is Aiden and I go to St Patricks primary school. I really like you poem and it looks like you have really thought about what you wrote.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your nice comment it was fun to do this with my friends so they can help me I need to put better information on the bottom.
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hi max my name is tom i am from st patricks school i really like your i am poem it looks like you put alot of effort into your work but maybe next time you could explan what you are doing at the begining.
ReplyDeleteThank you for telling me to explain what to do a the beginning blog you later
DeleteHi Max I am Kingi from Paihia School
ReplyDeleteI like your poem it’s cool. It has a lot of information about yourself. We are doing something similar to you here is a link to mine Link. Maybe next time explain what you are doing at the start.
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Deletehi max well done with the poetry i haven't tried it yet but it looks fun also you should try doing a haiku good luck and happy blogging
ReplyDeletethank you i didn't fully know what i am poem was when i posted it okay well i will like to check out your blog
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i like it all and wall done for you
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