i see a man on a crane, the crane is redm there is a building on contrustion, he has a go pro to get some cool shots and clips, its kinda tight where he is standing
I can see all those things too, and I liked that you used some topical words such as crane and construction. How do you think he might be feeling up that high? I think I would struggle a bit up there!
Kia ora Max my name is Tahuri I am a Year Five at Paihia School. I like your blog post about the man on the crane. I would be terrified if I was up there I really liked your blog post because I thought it was terrifying and cool at the same time. How long did it take you to make this? Keep up the good work.
Hi Max my name is Vaughan . I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I like your blog post about describing where the man is I like how you set the scene for where he is because we were doing the exact same type of things to. Do you know how high up here he is ?. Blog you later.
KIa ora Max my name Is Hawaiki. I like your man on a crane it is really scary because it is really high. I am really scared of heights because I have a feeling that the plane will go down and crash to the ground with me in it. The man is so brave to be that height because imagine if he fell. Nga mihi Hawaiki
I can see all those things too, and I liked that you used some topical words such as crane and construction. How do you think he might be feeling up that high? I think I would struggle a bit up there!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Max my name is Tahuri I am a Year Five at Paihia School. I like your blog post about the man on the crane. I would be terrified if I was up there I really liked your blog post because I thought it was terrifying and cool at the same time. How long did it take you to make this? Keep up the good work.
Hi Max my name is Vaughan . I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I like your blog post about describing where the man is
ReplyDeleteI like how you set the scene for where he is because we were doing the exact same type of things to. Do you know how high up here he is ?.
Blog you later.
KIa ora Max my name Is Hawaiki. I like your man on a crane it is really scary because it is really high. I am really scared of heights because I have a feeling that the plane will go down and crash to the ground with me in it. The man is so brave to be that height because imagine if he fell.
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