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Friday, March 2, 2018

i am poem


FIRST STANZA    
I am Max
I am Max
I wonder if there is going to be the future
I hear a pig on kingan
I see hawaii  
I want to go to hawaii
I am Max

SECOND STANZA
I pretend to be a cop
I feel the sky  
I touch a cloud
I worry that i am going to get a beat up
I cry at  a tangi
I am Max

THIRD STANZA
I understand rich people
I say that monster trucks
I dream about going to hawaii
I try to do work with my nan
I hope to learn
I am Max

this is my i am poem where i show you about what i think and do
 

6 comments:

  1. Hi Max. My name is Aiden and I go to St Patricks primary school. I really like you poem and it looks like you have really thought about what you wrote.

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  2. hi max my name is tom i am from st patricks school i really like your i am poem it looks like you put alot of effort into your work but maybe next time you could explan what you are doing at the begining.

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    1. Thank you for telling me to explain what to do a the beginning blog you later

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  3. Hi Max I am Kingi from Paihia School
    I like your poem it’s cool. It has a lot of information about yourself. We are doing something similar to you here is a link to mine Link. Maybe next time explain what you are doing at the start.

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  4. hi max well done with the poetry i haven't tried it yet but it looks fun also you should try doing a haiku good luck and happy blogging

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