Monday, July 2, 2018

Lost in the forest

There was a family in the forest, they could see a shiny beam of light  to an old, moss covered abandoned house. Mum doesn't want to go near it,  but they didn’t know where else to go. There were five paths and they decided to go down the dirty gravelled one straight towards the house.  They see a pile of dirty human bones sitting in the corner of the bedroom and mum said "We should split up in the house so we can find a room to stay in". The son gets kidnapped by someone wearing a dark woollen beanie while he was looking around in the house. The rest of the family gets scared. Dad tries to call for help but he had no reception on his phone.

Later that day there was another boy that came to the house. He had blonde, straight hair he was skinny and he was tall. He was by the house looking but quickly left because he saw the family looking out the window at him. He got scared. The family went outside and they saw dark red bloody eyes in the forest looking towards the house. Wire traps were all around the forest set by a serial killer who wanted to catch people who went near the house.

The other boy who was playing hide and seek also arrived at the house. He thought that the house was not abandoned and then goes inside. He gets scared because there were spiderwebs and bones on the floor.

Then the family left the abandoned house and went on the 5th path and found there house and there friends and families were there then they say “we promise not to go in the forest ever again”. Then they tell everyone what happened to them in the abandoned house.

this was fun to do because we didn't need to make all happy story's we can make whatever type of story we wanted.


  1. you are so good at working max from tk in room 2

    1. Thanks tk for the nice comment on my post

  2. hi max my name is James i like it all and it is really cool and you really explained it all and i hope you like my comment by max