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Wednesday, October 19, 2016

My Cinquain Poem.

10 comments:

  1. Hi max
    I really like your poem it is really amazing. I love how you added how you felt when they were around you. What is you favorite bird.

    Zach
    Yaldhurst model school

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  2. Hi Max,

    I really like your poem. I like how you added a picture at the bottom. I love how you added how you feel when birds are around you.

    Keep up the good work.

    Prudence,
    Yaldhurst Model School

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  3. Hi Max my Saxon and I am from yaldhurst model school, your seagull poem is really cool but I thought you could of added a bit more writing to make it go more smoothly.

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  4. Hi Max,

    Really cool poem! I really like described the bird. Do you like writing poems? I really like your post next time try and add a title page on your slide it will make it look even cooler. Looking forward to reading more of your post.
    Bree
    Yaldhurst model school

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  5. Hi Max,
    Your poem is really descriptive and also uses humor "You make me nervous when you fly around me."
    And I also like how you told me what sort of bird you were talking about at the end.
    Next time please make the writing and picture bigger.

    Thanks,
    Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.

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  6. Hey there its Chloe from yaldhurst model model School. I like your polm but maybe next time maybe just do a bit more.

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  7. Kia ora Max your poem is very cool. I like how you put when the birds are around you they make you nervous. I read your description and saw that you like Jack. Who is your favourite Mark, Jack or Ethan?

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  9. Hi max
    I like your poem it descripted and intresting but maybe next you could make it longer

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