Friday, February 16, 2018

toku pepeha

Tōku Pepeha

Ko Ruapekapeka tōku maunga
Ko Tirohanga tōku awa
Ko Ngatokimatawhaorua tōku waka
Ko Tumanako tōku marae
Ko Ngati Hine tōku hapu
Ko Ngapuhi tōku iwi
Ko Donna toku whaea
Ko Ron toku matua
Ko Lukey toku mama
Ko Jonathan toku papa
Ko Kanye tōku tuakana
Ko Anihera tōku tuahine
Ko Stormey-Lee toku teina

Ko Max tōku ingoa

8 comments:

  1. what is this pepeha???

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  2. Kia ora Max my names Rikki-Dean and I go to Paihia School. I saw your blog post about your pepeha. Your pepeha has a little bit of spelling mistakes in it. I think you should get a reading buddy to cheek it so that it makes sense. I have some words that I don't know how to spell but I just ask someone to help me.
    Thank you for posting keep up the good work.

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  3. Hi Max I really like the way you set your pepeha up that was really cool. But there were a lot of mistakes I noticed You didn’t put capital letters for the names of people or names of places maybe try to do that next time but. Other than that it’s really cool. Great job.

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    1. thank you it took me a long time to finish but i tried teachers helped me as well.

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  4. hi my name is james and it is a nice job

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  5. Hi my name is Sam and I am 9 years old I love your toku pepeha and maybe next time you could put more colour into your toku pepeha. I like it a lot keep it up. :-)

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  6. Kia ora Max, my name is Jamie and I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I remember last time your pepeha had a lot of spelling mistakes but now I see you have fixed it up now it makes a lot more sense. Looks like you read some of the feedback people gave you by the way your pepeha is really cool. Keep up the good work.

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    1. thank you i needed to remember my pepeha for a long time

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