On the weekend i went to Auckland with my Cousins for a birthday. Me and my cousin went down for a swim for 5 or 6 hours and then we went to my brothers house pick him up for the rest of the weekend.
When we got home we went to go buy some fish and chips we meet my friend downtown. When we got home we had to go to Kawakawa to see my uncle in hospital and my nana.
Sounds like you had a very eventful weekend. Where did you go swimming? Maybe next time you could add some more information about what you feel, see, hear, smell, taste etc to add more detail for the reader.
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