On the weekend I went out with my friends at the park and then my friends mum came to pick us up to go to waiomio for a few hours and when we got back to Kawakawa we went to go get. Fish and chips at Sams and when we got back home we had a munch and. then my friend dropped me off home.
It sounds like you had a very eventful weekend again. I love that you get to spend so much time with your friends and whanau. Maybe next time you could focus your writing on one part of your weekend and describe it with a little more detail. What did you do, what could you feel, smell, taste, hear etc. Try to take the reader with you.
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